My Mind And Me Poem by Llewellyn Douglas

My Mind And Me

Rating: 4.6


Many questions on my mind
The answers so difficult to find
Everyday so tired of thinking
About the same thing

The challenges coming my way
Knowing they not there to stay
Preparing me to be strong
No matter the time short or long

Get up, go to work, eat sleep
How boring to sow and reap
In such a manner like this
It's so wrong it's craziness

Time so precious, life so short
Wipe your eyes, everything gone
Years gone by and really forgot
That they went through, such a lot

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

Most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day chosen by Poem Hunter and Team. TOP Marks for this brilliant gem, yes, a GEM! CONGRATULATIONS, dear Poet and Hearty Welcom to Poem Hunter Poetry Site. Keep creating!

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Llewellyn Douglas 16 October 2024

Good evening Sylvia.I appreciate and thank you from the bottom of my heart.As a South African with different languages.I am Afrikaans, composing the poems in English makes it a bit difficult.The poem itself flows from my heart.Thanx a gain Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

This poem goes toMyFavourites. Thank you for sharing!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

ONE: A very cleverly constructed poem, it seems written with simple words, but in the meantime, it is very cleverly constructed, with good end-rhymes and the answer

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

TWO: in the last sentence is very philosophical, really a cute masterpiece, you are very welcome on Poem Hunter Poetry Site, dear poet It's really an intelligent poem! Congratulations on the choice of Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. This poem goes to MyFavourites

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Bharati Nayak 18 August 2025

Time flies without us realizing that we had spent our whole life in the daily grind and we had not cared to pursue our passion. Congratulations for your poem being selected as the Poem of the Day!

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Rob Lamberton 17 August 2025

"Time so precious, life so short"

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Itohan Stephanie # 27 June 2025

Nice poem i must say

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Llewellyn Douglas 13 October 2024

Hi all.Thank you so much for the encouragement.I really appreciate you all.Gos bless

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 September 2024

The intricacies of life is vividly depicted in this wonderful poem. Well expressed. Congratulations for having this poem as Member Poem Of The Day.

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