Emerging from undetermined vortex
Sea waves rush towards its shore:
Relentlessly chasing one another
Never catching up, perishing at coast.
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Wonderful surge of thoughts which has the force and magnitude of the tides of the deep! Yes, beneath the placidity of the human mind, often there are whirls and swirls! ! Great write! !
The mind is like a computer disc, it gets filled to the brim with information. I guess we have to learn how to upload it all in order to get so e peace.
A Very Beautiful write. Very true said, our mind is calm like sea from surface but inside are the whirlpool of thoughts. It is very difficult to come out of that....
Most of the minds are perhaps so. But when you have gone introspective here your mind is full the brim for its transparency. A fine write....
wonderful poem sir..........with very true facts about human mind.....................its just air...looks nothing but is a mixture of many things........... i also invite u to read my poems[speciallly hindi]