Monday, December 3, 2018

My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

My mind, a pampas
Lying, glaring towards the open sky
A babbling mountain stream
An angry fireball sometimes
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Bichitra Anand
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Chinedu Dike 04 October 2019

An insightful and compelling composition, well conceived and elegantly brought forth with conviction. Thanks for sharing.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 December 2018

Great poetry, Bichitra. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 05 December 2018

My mind, a pampas Lying, glaring towards the open sky A babbling mountain stream An angry fireball sometimes Blazing in summer A lonely dove lamenting In dark silent midnight.- - A great philosophical write, thanks for sharing.

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Jolly S Lee 03 December 2018

After all what is mind? A dove, a traveller or a pampas. Nice deep thought.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 December 2018

A lovely dove lamenting, great line, each one is dove but in sorrows

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Jolly S Lee 03 December 2018

You r right Sir.after all what is mind? It is a dove, a traveller, a pampas.....so nicely, deeply thought.

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