Wednesday, October 15, 2008

My Mind Comments

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My mind;
having no good understanding
nor a high mental capacity, serves no purpose,
meaning, or direction, in simplicity it’s mindless.
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Mindless minds
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Trinity K 19 October 2008

Ghalib said.' leave heart and mind alone and seperated sometimes.'

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S... Che 17 October 2008

nice poem, very well written

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Ency Bearis 15 October 2008

so you are an emptiness but your love is sacred and nowhere to be stopped as it is in bloom? ...is that the way it implies? ...keep on writing..need to see more.. Ency Bearis

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