Tuesday, September 12, 2006
My Message In A Bottle Comments
Rating: ★4.8
As I walked along that lonely shore
Miles and miles from anywhere
A thick sea mist obscured the horizon
Even the gulls were quiet
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Francesca Johnson
12 September 2006
Not always the quickest way to send a letter, eh, Marilyn? But seriously, your poem had me spellbound - I couldn't wait to find out what the message said! The ending was better than I hoped it would be. Great writing. Love, Fran xx
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8/4/2025 4:22:15 AM # 1.0.0
Captivating story in free verse. Keeps you hanging on for the message. The initial scene setting atmosphere is excellent. Patrick