Saturday, November 5, 2011

My Memory Speaks.......... Comments

Rating: 2.0

The world changes as the needles hit
each digits in my watch.
My heart too keeps pace with it
n from it numerous dreams hatch.
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NEETHA SASIDHARAN
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Dr Antony Theodore 26 September 2015

there is so much of innocence, it is sweet and genuine . thank you Neetha

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Claudia Krizay 27 March 2012

Really great! I enjoyed this a lot-

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the decent thing which i think about this poem is that it deals with real ideas, real things, real aspirations.no complex abstract thingy.i like thy humor.And the flittering ideal profession is a funny albeit mind consuming problem.good write.

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Prasanna Kumari 03 January 2012

beautiful...words flow bringing the past through the present to the future...

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Vipins Puthooran 29 December 2011

Wow, it's beautiful write and a wonderful poem! ! Top marks! ! !

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