Thursday, May 15, 2008

My Memory Comments

Rating: 5.0

His blue, blue eyes,
Are just a memory.
One in which is trapped
In the deep depths of my mind.
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Allysyn Bryant
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Chinedu Dike 13 October 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing.

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Anuradha Karunamuni 09 August 2008

'...I thought we had years But now I know It was all a lie, a joke, A meaningless experiment...' Gosh! ! ! This poem made me cry...

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Dislocated Heart 11 July 2008

hmm... i can relate, but different characters. lovely poem.. memories, how can you forget them? its like a scar. with time, memories will fade.- an old friend told me this.. i hope everything is alright.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 23 May 2008

touching poem, thanks for sharing

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