Saturday, October 12, 2013

My Memories Of You Comments

Rating: 5.0

My memories of you, like waves keep coming back
Add torment and torture onto my troubled mind
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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2019

ADDITION: I cite your first line here: My memories of you, like waves keep coming back. EXCELLENT metaphor used. Thank you for sharing this brilliant poem. Though very sad and full of melancholy, an excellent read, I must admit. God's Blessings in Abundance. Amen

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 March 2019

Not really a pleasant experience to have these memories, especially of the one you love most. Excellent poem in brevity. I enjoyed reading the melancholic lovely words. A 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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