My Memories Are Faded Dreams Comments

This is a very good poem, when I read your forum post I was expecting something so-so. I admire how you used a new form and style and used it so well.10!

Very nice Rafia, I like this very much, another (10) of course---Melvina

Goodbyes to the ones you love Love has to break Break apart in the end End is near Near to my end. this poem makes us to relax, we wish you may live long with our prayer is for you, like a new rose, rosy to dream and strength

Clever and holds together well - I like this Rafia, steve