Saturday, April 12, 2014

My Meandering Mind Comments

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My mind meanders down those endless lanes
Then soars to realms beyond the stars.
Imagination knows no bounds
Amongst the multiverses that make up
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Paul Butters
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Nika Mcguin 01 March 2017

Ironically I wrote a poem with the same title, and even a very similar topic. In both of our poems we discuss wanting to be far away from the binding restrictions of society - and they're both about our dreams being somewhat distant. Though that does not mean we're giving up on them. All the same I relate to your poem, a great write~!

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Paul Butters 01 March 2017

Many thanks Nika. I'm sure there are many others like us. Oh, there I go again! ;)

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Paul Butters 12 April 2014

Thanks Rishabh. Am very grateful.

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Rishabh Bidya 12 April 2014

Nice Work, Paul! ! : D

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