Saturday, August 4, 2018

My Mathematics Comments

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I had figured out all his flaws.
Calculated all the risks involved in letting him know how much I love him.
Counted all his mistakes.
Added his sorrow into mine.
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Ruchi chaurasiya
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Bri Edwards 02 September 2018

(cont.) this is 'yet another' fine poem, with lots of insight into human nature, in the 'love'/'relationship' areas. and you throw in a bit of humor/humour at the end! Delightful. to MyPoemList. and: I'D USE: calculations dispersed [with d at the verb's ending; and i think it sounds better to add s to calculation also] bri :)

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Kanav Justa 30 August 2018

Love and maths, all know how wicked they two can get . An interesting correlation that you showed the reader in your poem

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Ruchi Chaurasiya 30 August 2018

Thankyou Kanav, I hope you would like to have a look on my new poem I yet to figure out

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