My Mask Comments

you poem 'my mask' is alot better then mine. this is the first one of yours i read but i will look through the rest soon

Liked these lines: AND AS I LIE AWAKE AT NIGHT, WHEN ALL ELSE IS ASLEEP QUIETLY AND OUT OF SIGHT, THE TEARS ROLL DOWN MY CHEEK AND EACH DAY BEFORE I SET OUT, TO DO MY DAILY TASK I QUIETLY COMPOSE MYSELF, AND PUT ON MY MASK A SMILE I PUT ON FOR ALL THE WORLD TO SEE SO THAT NO ONE WILL NOTICE THE TURMOIL INSIDE OF ME your sorry and sense of sorrow is what i liked most. it is time to be without mask when we all are really sorry....is nt it thank u for sharing ur poems and ides. i wil read more. thank u for ur letter.

I liked this a lot. How sad. =...(