Thursday, September 25, 2008

My Mask Comments

Rating: 5.0


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Fay Slimm 25 September 2008

A strictly proseaic piece Adam, and has all the marks of providing a very good read. Would it have been better however for you to present it in liniage form. I think so, as it presents a somewhat large block as it is. Just a thought from Fay. A ten for a good honest piece.

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