Tuesday, March 24, 2015

My Marriage Vows Comments

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We make a great pair,
A match so rare.
Each day we'll hug,
And be each other's drug.
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Stephen Katona
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Bri Edwards 15 June 2015

Steve, i haven't even read the poem (i DID read Valsa's comment; she's so NICE............it's sickening! hee-hee) yet …….., but i guarantee your poem would not have saved my first 3 marriages. let me see. WHAT'S # 4? i mean the anniversary! if it's pizza, i'll forever strive to have marriages (mine) last at least four years. [all four have so far, one at a time] sees us stood, .............. must be some 'britainism'. Google 'says' the 75th is diamond and/or gold; you'll be lucky (or unlucky?) if you get that old! i can't help but ask: how old were you when, and during which year of the marriage did you/you did write the poem, AND how many years have you recited it so far? ? i THINK YOU made most of the poem 'retroactive'. no, NOT radioactive, but it might be that also. good old Lora! good not-so-old Steve. thanks for sharing. Mary-aka-Bri :) :)

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Valsa George 25 March 2015

Wow.... how many couples can say this; ..................................................... ........................................................ 'We'll do this and more, Rise above clouds and soar.' Stephen, let many emulate your example and renew their marriage vows! Some of my favourite lines; 'At twenty-five you're even dearer, Now we've reached the colour silver.' 'Fifty will be Gold, Both now rather old.'.............. So inspiring I must say! A clean10

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