Saturday, July 30, 2005

My Maelstrom Comments

Rating: 4.3

It’s a rock song and I won’t let you in it
Step away from my maelstrom
Bits of torn metal shred me to bits to submit
My soul to the earsplitting blast of drums
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Natasha Ashwe
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Original Unknown Girl 06 September 2007

Wow Natasha, this really blew me away, I read it feeling all tingly inside, can't describe it otherwise. Your biog is so fresh and honest and inspiring, I'm looking forward to reading more of yours. Just brilliant! HG: -) xx

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Chris Mendros 21 March 2007

You pulled me in to this rock song. The music of your soul pours out on the page.

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Nalini Hebbar 01 August 2006

this is a very powerful poem...emotions run real deep...sorrow and pain are quite like a storm that make us stand on a precipice...this way or that...it depends on your strength...loved the poem...write on...love...nalini

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Elizabeth Diller 25 July 2006

It is wonderful to find some one with the grace, the rhythm, the imagery, the alliteration, the content to keep me wanting more. Storms are good for the storm.

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Natasha Ashwe

Natasha Ashwe

Kingston, Ontario.
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