Friday, July 14, 2006

My Lune Comments

Rating: 4.5

if loving her unthinkable things happen
like we see in Harlem then living
in Harlem unthinkable things
could happen in the backyard of love
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Padmore Enyonam Agbemabiese
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***** ********* 14 July 2006

I really enjoyed thiis light to your Lune Padmore. I think the last line would be stronger without the repeat of traveler's but you leave a beautiful impression, however you choose to end it. Another beautiful poem, thanks for sharing her light, Smiling at you, Tai

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Padmore Enyonam Agbemabiese

Padmore Enyonam Agbemabiese

Abor, Volta Region, Ghana
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