My Lullaby Comments

Beautiful poetry Lora. You must believe it to be so just by all of the sincere comments. Love your work. Beautiful and enlightening!

A lovely poem Lora. I like it very much.

Sweet and lovely lullaby of love!

Wonderful lullaby, very expressive and creative sentiments!

The sun's work is over, the moon's shift begins, The sweet smell of jasmine floats on the wind; Though your heart is breaking, try not to cry, I'll sing the words softly..... hear my lullaby. such song like melody, i got lost in it and its going in my fav. poem list. a 10 for it. please read some of my poems and comment. :)

Marvelous lullaby refrain poem, to me d jasmines embellish its beauty along with how creatively say, d moon caressing d ground! Kudos pal.

whether it be sun or moon I adore you both clasp my heart taking turns to light your face a muse has come to my bed dreams of Lorraine in my head visit my quill with wet words I await your glow

And when the dawn breaks into a promising morn, I'll be right here with you as the new day is born there's always love and hope in your poem, Lora, really soothes your lullaby.

Oh! Lora so beautiful! I think next time I am up for night I will think of it and think of you for giving us such lovely gift.

So beautiful., throughly enjoyed it: -)