Wednesday, November 1, 2006

My Lucky Star Comments

Rating: 4.5

My lucky star
So close yet so far
A star so pure so true
That make me feel better and yet blue
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Berhan Mehari
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Luwi Habte 26 April 2010

well penned there, i like it,

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Lidia Yeibio 11 November 2006

Time solves this too Braki. You surely will. Nice poem.

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Peter A. Crowther 06 November 2006

Real feeling of poetry here and some nice rhymes. I loved it too.

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A. B. 02 November 2006

Hope all your wishes come true. I loved this one. Peace.

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