My life was pain
So pained I hated my very existence
My soul screened for help
But I never mattered to them
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It is such a heartfelt poem! From utter darkness you moved to a guiding light.May God always illuminate your path.
Powerful sentiments and great emotions brilliantly expressed.. Very touching with meaningful messages. ' Let me ride on my own fate' powerful line from a great poem. Top Marks!
It is so wonderful to hear that God has turned your heart to Himself! Thank you so much for sharing! May you grow in love and devotion for God! Blessings!
Very pretty poem, Itohan! I'm so glad to hear that God has shown you his light! Thank you for sharing : )
This poem will touch the hearts of lots of people, great write
You come up with lines that are uniquely your own. 'Let me ride on my own fate' is wonderful. At first it seems dark, but it turns out to have a bright side because you found faith.
Made a revisit today. Loved reading once again
The heart of a poet is deeper than his pain, you are a true poetUnnikrishnan.Thank you.
We are all blessed to have a Vine that produces sweet wine in us! !