Saturday, August 3, 2024

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Rating: 3.7

My life was pain
So pained I hated my very existence
My soul screened for help
But I never mattered to them
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Itohan Stephanie #
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Denis Mair 07 November 2024

You come up with lines that are uniquely your own. 'Let me ride on my own fate' is wonderful. At first it seems dark, but it turns out to have a bright side because you found faith.

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Made a revisit today. Loved reading once again

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Itohan Stephanie # 24 October 2024

The heart of a poet is deeper than his pain, you are a true poetUnnikrishnan.Thank you.

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Faith heals many wounds… good poem.5*

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