My Lucky Day Poem by Itohan Stephanie #

My Lucky Day

Rating: 4.2

My life was pain
So pained I hated my very existence
My soul screened for help
But I never mattered to them
i was just an ordinary wine
Pain was the only emotion I mastered

Please take pity on me
Am a motherless child
i was a bitter wine, woven to become nothing
Should I blame my mother or my father?
they have done me wrong.
Let me bear my own sin

They gave me bitterness and expected sweetness from me
They gave me neglect and expected affection from me
Let me ride on my fate
Am a woman Alone, l bear this grudge.

Who would come for me in this darkness
So dark, I trusted no one
Little did I know.GOD was watching
In the midst of the darkness
The Ruler of both the celestial realm and all the realms of the world

Everyone under the sun and the moon
has a lucky day
Have Faith

Took me by hand
And gave me His Light
My Lucky day I guess.

My Lucky Day
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 07 November 2024

You come up with lines that are uniquely your own. 'Let me ride on my own fate' is wonderful. At first it seems dark, but it turns out to have a bright side because you found faith.

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Itohan Stephanie # 08 September 2025

Am happy you connected with this piece.thanks

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Made a revisit today. Loved reading once again

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Itohan Stephanie # 24 October 2024

The heart of a poet is deeper than his pain, you are a true poetUnnikrishnan.Thank you.

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Itohan Stephanie # 08 September 2025

Thanks poet

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Rob Lamberton 16 October 2025

We are all blessed to have a Vine that produces sweet wine in us! !

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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2025

It is such a heartfelt poem! From utter darkness you moved to a guiding light.May God always illuminate your path.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 October 2025

Beautiful closure lines! Very inspiring.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 October 2025

Powerful sentiments and great emotions brilliantly expressed.. Very touching with meaningful messages. ' Let me ride on my own fate' powerful line from a great poem. Top Marks!

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Timber Koleden 05 October 2025

It is so wonderful to hear that God has turned your heart to Himself! Thank you so much for sharing! May you grow in love and devotion for God! Blessings!

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