Wednesday, May 11, 2011

My Lucky Charm... Comments

Rating: 4.8

Innocence slept within her,
Didn't like to pretend...
Zestful was the nature,
I just hoped it would never ever end...
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Ahmedabad, Gujarat, India
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