Monday, February 29, 2016

My Loyal Dog Comments

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My Dog has won competition in race,
I have learned to run in any place.

He comes to stay by my side in my loneliness,
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Abderrahmane Dakir
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Chinedu Dike 13 March 2017

Dog is man's best friend. Unhappy to see it's owner go away and very happy to see the person come back. It's loyalty is second to know. And if you spell it's name backward, it's god! Lovely poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 April 2016

His difficult task. Thanks for sharing.

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Bri Edwards 15 March 2016

i wonder, maybe i should have married a dog instead of a woman. would our child be a doman or a humog? i do not own a dog, but i'm sure they bring many 'owners' great satisfaction. a few suggestions: His look towards me strengths my consciousness... strengthens my consciousness and I've learned how easier enjoying the mental............. i don't understand the use fo mental here. also, there are several different forms of the sentence i could suggest, but definitely not the form you have used. and He doesn't hold grudges even I hit his feeling, .........even if (or when) i HURT his feelings? but you have made your point very clear: 'your' dog is a great companion, and a good watch dog at night. bri :)

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Lyn Paul 11 March 2016

Dogs are incredibly loyal and a wonderful companion. Thank you for reminding us the calming magic of a dog.

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Sandra Feldman 08 March 2016

He's Beautiful! What is his name? Very touching poem about the noble and wonderful attributes of dogs and how much we love these faithful creatures. Brought tears to my eyes, I recently lost my wonderful companion, Sandy. My sadness is very great. He was my best friend. Thank you for this beautiful work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 09 March 2016

Thank you Sandra for reading. I'm so sorry about your Dog Sandy.

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Brian Mayo 08 March 2016

Nice poem. I love my dog, too. We can learn a lot from these lovable, trusting companions.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 08 March 2016

Thank you Mr. Brian Mayo for this great comment.

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Spock The Vegan 08 March 2016

Dogs are always loving. They have no hesitation to protect their master. Thanks.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 08 March 2016

Thank you Spock The Vegan for reading. Your comment is great.

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Valsa George 01 March 2016

A dog is such a loyal companion to man. It loves its master unconditionally. It is great fun to have a dog around while going for walks. A sweet write on a dog you keep! Enjoyed!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 March 2016

Thank you Valsa for this great comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 29 February 2016

A sweet and simple poem nicely penned on a loyal pet. Beautiful.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 01 March 2016

Thank you Mr.Akhtar for this great comment.

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M Asim Nehal 29 February 2016

Awesome poem....Humans best friend, ally...The Dog....Liked it...10+++

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Thank you Mr.Nehal for writing this awesome comment for this poem. The dog is loyal but the best friend is the human because we have the brain that we could use it.

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