My Loving Sister Comments

Great poem, very loving and delicate portrayal of love for a sister! Love it! Have six sisters of my own, your poem touched my heart!

Beautiful! ! I love the way u portrayed it, keep it up my dear

This is Pretty Cool Aishwarya, sweet and remarkable....i did remember the word 'Road of life'..i did wrote this before to my friend, and some lines really bring back my memory about my friend...overall what i can say it such beautiful writing..what a sugar ink u got hahaha...well i think u need to change name at ur last line. 'sissy' is not sound good but sis much better...the word sissy just messy...like this poem_Unwritten SOul