Tuesday, June 2, 2009

My Loves Wedding Comments

Rating: 5.0

One said, its a secret
So don't say to anyone
Said, she is marrying
That she is, my love
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Kranthi Pothineni
COMMENTS
Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 June 2009

This things are part of one's lie but only thing i know about he life is life must go on...............

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rago rago 03 June 2009

What is life? Go take her heart and hand and that should have done...Loveliest Angel Living In The Heart Alive........ we have to initiate and marry.....Society will never never never appreciate love of life.......you have penned well and brought the nerves instil.........

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Louis Rams 03 June 2009

the broken heart always survives the pain, because with true love there is so much to gain. you gave your heart when it was blue to keep her happy, and with that i praise you. beautifully written

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Lee Crowell 03 June 2009

you bring the feeling of brokenheartedness like a dart through my chest your unusual way of stringing words together in an noncoverstational style is appealing, it makes me feel like I'm reading your mind thanks for sharing this Kranthi

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

It is a sad poem. 10+++ In this poem you have described how heart started to pain badly; how it was broken and why you placed hand on heart. Touching composition. I became gloomy…

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Eyan Desir 03 June 2009

Good flow Good write Keep pouring your love

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Joseph Poewhit 03 June 2009

You can't put a square peg into a round hole - some things in love just don't fit.

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Catrina Heart 03 June 2009

A love not meant to be....but have the sacrifice to free.....and be happy! lovely poem...10+++

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Janell Cressman 02 June 2009

don't give up hope of finding your one true love, because true love is out there some were just waiting for you to find it! ! ! amazingly written poem of longing and heart break, i'm sorry it had to be written from truth

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a depiction of a one sided love...may be.. not expressed...written well poetically

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Surya . 02 June 2009

marriages are made in heaven.better things are in store.i liked the last para. 'Wedding, which i can't go My broken heart is weak It can't break down more But its each broken piece Sings a happy marry life' well penned.posted 10 love surya

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

hello sir, thanks for inviting me to read this one...i did feel it to the core of my heart...you know what sir...I v a feeling that I might not even be invited to my best friend's wedding.... ' Wedding, which i can't go My broken heart is weak It can't break down more But its each broken piece' I know the feeling...no words of consolation can heal....people say time will heal...i hope it will friend..oh sir I just hope it wont happen to me here's a toast to the happiness of our beloveds...... cheers! ! ! ! ! may they live a charmed life A++

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