Tuesday, January 31, 2006

My Lover's Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

My lover’s eyes are never far from my thoughts,
Nor the lingering touch of her delicate hands,
Nor the warm softness of her lips when she kisses me,
Nor the joy I take from holding her in my arms.
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William Jackson
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*Trusting You* 28 November 2008

Has not influenced a man like me to her advantage, Madly, deeply, hopelessly I love you! I dream only you. I think only of you. yes the power of the Female! ! ! good lines. this is really cute. good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Rachel Blank 10 October 2008

Amazing poem! I'll be looking for more from you. Keep up the good work!

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Janelle Morehart 13 April 2008

I like your work, it does not scream Poetry, but it tells a story. Vague, yet blunt. True yet not completely there. I love it, lots of emotions and I can see the inspiration that has pushed you into writing this. Lovely work(s) of art! By far you are a true example that Written Art is indeed a most Visual Art.

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Sylvi Sylva 02 January 2008

Brilliant again William, topman once again! Keep em coming!

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L Pierson 16 June 2007

A poem that causes your eyes to fill with tears is pretty powerful. I would give anything to have someone feel this for me. I hope your special someone appreiciates it. Thank you for envolking such emotion.

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Kay Allen 13 February 2006

wow.... this is such a beautiul sentiment to love each word so powerful, each word, heartfelt and honest kay

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Kay Allen 13 February 2006

wow.... this is such a beautiul sentiment to love each word so powerful, each word, heartfelt and honest kay

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Sydney Daniels 11 February 2006

So strong! Such a love is shameless, and I hope she feels the same for you!

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Tara Crown 11 February 2006

Your pictures are tragic and sublime...such is love :) Please write more..your words have that gorgeous haunting flavor of the unquenchable. ~Peace~

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Truly, madly, deeply evocative.

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Patricia Gale 07 February 2006

Oh my, how wonderful. I have enjoyed yout writtings throughly. I wish to read more Patricia

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Ndidi Ubogu 01 February 2006

I see love as everything. A man that cannot love, cannot live. And in your poetry you difined love in so many ways. Like i said to a poet recently, 'True love cannot be defined' Very sweet poem written out of love.

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kskdnj sajn 31 January 2006

A dreamy treat to read this evening. Thanks, great poem!

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William Jackson

William Jackson

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