Thursday, January 1, 2009

My Lovely Telephone Comments

Rating: 5.0

He called,
I knew the ring,
my kitchen chair,
the bloody dog,
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Sarah Everson
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Somehow Frank gets to say it all! ! Just loved the wide expanse of unsaid pauses...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 January 2009

Excellent take on duel-rolling a phone conversation....not an easy feat, my dear...however, through your instinctive mindset, coupled with sprite verve, and resplendent depiction...you 'dun' wrote yir'self one 'ell uv a phone-call! Solid crafting...Structurally pristine. F j R 2009

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