My Lovely Nephews Comments

The theme of change is well brought out.The woman's voice is not subdued any more and informing men to view it differently is what i like about this poem.You score a 10

Good message auntie! ! i love this

Nice advice to your lovely nephews. Thanks for sharing.

The boy has been pushed to the realm, reality is sinking i like the hope that this lines express 'My nephews, don't be cowed by this aggression Men can rule their world better when women know their needs and wants'

Good message to the boys, i like your honest writing.