Like the twinkle of the star,
Like the beating of heart,
Like the flutter of wings,
Like the blessing of god,
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this was fantastic Vikram! excellent flow and beautiful metaphors.. well done! HBH
WELL CRAFTED WORK...SMOOTH FLUX, TIGHT, CRISP STRUCTURE...SOBERING THEME WELL EXPRESSED...''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK JOB WELL DONE, VIK!
heyyy Vikram this is a great poem! Does she exist, or is this just some brilliant imagination? a definite 10/10 from me! Keep up the great writing! Dona
Apt expression of love.Godod poem