Monday, January 21, 2013

My Love To The River Comments

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But your eyes are shining
bright way you looks
shall we walk to the river
leaving behind all, to scoff
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Thampi KEE
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Unwritten Soul 22 January 2013

I feel free with those lines..nice write kee_Soul

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Valsa George 21 January 2013

Thus to know the scent of your rivers, you are inviting your lady love for a stroll to the river side! I visualize you both walking hand in hand enjoying the cool breeze and watching the small wavelets! An imaginative write! ! Kee, thanks for the wonderful comments on my poem! !

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Gajanan Mishra 21 January 2013

Great sunshine begins to write love. good one.

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Thampi KEE

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