My Love, The Humanity And Friendship (Short Poem) Comments

A clarion call for universal brotherhood of man, elegantly penned in good rhyme scheme with insight. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Ellias.

Today's wars are destroying everything. Thanks for sharing.

we have lost the true essence of humanity, compassion for we rid ourselves of the conscience.. Great poem!

An adorable poem promoting tranquility. Cool to read! Do chk out my imaginary poem.

simple, short but have deep meaning so words say the true nice poem and well written

So true, Ellias... nice poem... Terry

Super bit of truth, a celebration is in order.

Read your poem and agree with your sentiments. Would like to see how it reads without repeating the in the first four lines. To children looking for calm sleep and people who love humanity from deep....... Really do like your thoughts! Keep writing - I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Thank you for inviting me. RoseAnn

Hey dude. I read your poem. You know, man is always condemned to suffer. War and Fight are tools for it. The only solution for it and reaching piece is death. cuz as long as man exists, there would be war! ! ! ! ! No man, No war! ! ! ! hehe. Good Luck Dear Ellias.

Thats why you are sweetie and i am proud you are my lil sibling _Soul