Tuesday, April 17, 2018

My Love Story You Read Comments

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My love story that starts at the twilight of a dawn,
my love story that ends at the twilight of dusk,
Sweetheart! I know you read it.
It's poetic, it's ecstatic, it paints you beauty,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2019

BEAUTIFUL POETRY FLOWERY I JUST POSTED A SNAP SIMILARLY MAY SEE ALL MY FLOWERS HAD TWO LIPS TULIPS U GO AND SEE JA JI UR POETRY IS FLAVOURLY

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Dawn Novus 15 May 2018

Under the violet sky the love you paint is Monet in crystal clear focus, the beauty of love sings so soul fully in your words. What a moving piece.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2018

Wow, spellbinding write. Your loved one must be enraptured by the beauty of the words embedded in this poem. So romantic.10

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Valsa George 18 April 2018

So twilight is the time when the lover in you rises up............! A very imaginative and romantic write, Akhtar ji

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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2018

You are the master of romantic writing!

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Kostas Lagos 18 April 2018

A poem full of beautiful images!

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Rini shibu 17 April 2018

Beauty of nature captures the mind and it's aroma is as sweet as love.++10

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Khalida Bano Ali 17 April 2018

Such a beautiful poem, the reader becomes ecstatic to read it.

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