My Love Story You Read Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Love Story You Read

Rating: 5.0


My love story that starts at the twilight of a dawn,
my love story that ends at the twilight of dusk,
Sweetheart! I know you read it.
It's poetic, it's ecstatic, it paints you beauty,
I know you like and love my stories
though you never write a comment,
but I can see the aurora at the dawn and dusk,
it exposes your inner joy hidden in your heart,
your pink face exposes your heart,
and when you turn your face,
your naughty friends,
the moon and the stars,
whisper in my ears,
how long nature can remain away from the nature!
May be tonight, or the next night,
clouds will hide the moon and the stars,
she will descend in your arms
with the downpours on the dry soil,
to write her comments on your thirsty lips!
The flowers will narrate what happened in that night
and all your friends will titillate you to tell the details of love
that colorful and aromatic flowers forgot to tell.

My Love Story You Read
Tuesday, April 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 17 April 2018

Such a beautiful poem, the reader becomes ecstatic to read it.

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Rini shibu 17 April 2018

Beauty of nature captures the mind and it's aroma is as sweet as love.++10

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Kostas Lagos 18 April 2018

A poem full of beautiful images!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 October 2019

BEAUTIFUL POETRY FLOWERY I JUST POSTED A SNAP SIMILARLY MAY SEE ALL MY FLOWERS HAD TWO LIPS TULIPS U GO AND SEE JA JI UR POETRY IS FLAVOURLY

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Dawn Novus 15 May 2018

Under the violet sky the love you paint is Monet in crystal clear focus, the beauty of love sings so soul fully in your words. What a moving piece.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 18 April 2018

Wow, spellbinding write. Your loved one must be enraptured by the beauty of the words embedded in this poem. So romantic.10

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Valsa George 18 April 2018

So twilight is the time when the lover in you rises up............! A very imaginative and romantic write, Akhtar ji

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Kelly Kurt 18 April 2018

You are the master of romantic writing!

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