My Love Story Comments

At the onset of this poem, the poet had psycological satisfaction. He was love- motivated in the begining but reclused to delusion at the end. Love could motvate or cause internal disequilibrum. Everyone have this experience this from time to time. Good poem.

very nice poem...i love to read like this more.

First I felt envious of you for your being the writer of this poem! Next I felt proud of you for your being truly a lover of all times. Beneath the stars and the moon on this land of mystery this love has to bloom ever and lovers like you must tell such tales.. A good write Gulsher John.

This is so lovely! I really enjoyed reading this!

Beautiful write sir. I enjoyed reading it a lot

That's what happen to most of the love stories. Very few people in the world have their one true love with them, forever, really moved me, I like the way your poem proceeds, touching rhyme and rythm, you generally Use ancient myth in your poetry but this time you played with Keats, Romeo and Tess, what a talent you are, liked it, toooooo much, Thanks

You are a lover and this is a one love poem. I really liked you changed your style a bit to show that the passion of your love needed something open and different. Again your allusions are to the point, the names of character that make you sad. So come close and open your hearts To dropp down my melancholy thoughts Mind! Not just focus in rhymes Feels what it reveals on to your soul sublime Then the twist in the poem and reference to eclipse The rainbow of my love got eclipse...... This is a powerful line Gulsher..... and the stanza this line belongs to remind of Wallace when his beloved is killed. I solute you dear.

Such an amazing grace, poetic expression in lines...beautiful and beautiful...well done Gulsher! _Soul

oh my god. I got shivers, that was bueatifal and what a twist! so sad in the end but it did not stop how beautifal it was. thank you.

Beautiful poetry, poignant and sad.

A good sad and gentle write -the occasional rhyme-pattern shows that it is a well-knit composition-the impact is created-thank you for sharing it-

What a beautiful and poignant story with such a sad end. I love your style of writing in this poem you have opened your heart with such raw honesty. Brilliant and inspired write! !