My Love Song For You Comments

Love song of peace and joy! Nice piece of work.

i love rhymings and in your poem it arosed more.well very passionate poem about love. very well done................. i invite u to come and comment my poems they are also rhymes

This is a beautiful love song that I would like to hear again and again. 'Being attached with a deep affection for each other Lending our hands and our shoulders for one another' - and.. 'Forgiving our mistakes and putting them in the past Having trust and faith is how love can last' Loved these beautiful couplets.

Simple, but more passionate

close your eyes and sing your songs so nearly to your heart And touch your body with your hand Smoothly and move towards your eyes