My Love's Light Comments

b'ful poem, , , written very deeply...fantastic one..really very sad theme..

This is beautiful and moving, keep writing.

A well penned write, well expressed and creative thinking.

Nice wording. Awesome. Good expression.

I liked it alot. Best of luck.

probably my favorite one of yours so far. the flow is really good and reminds me of the way i write.... loved it loved it loved it

The way you used the words in this poem to keep it flowing is what makes it great