Thursday, July 24, 2008

My Love Pot Comments

Rating: 4.7

Nsiribom come beat that slow rhumba for my dancing pleasure...
Yes Yes I came along with My tortoise shell to back you up...
Sisi Maybelle is here...Her waist is to be warmed..It has to end-up wet...
Nsiribom did you see her sweet smile...
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Anthony Edmond John
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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

She wont leave my arms..Oh! To them Sisi Maybelles, Cutting across reality into Dreamland's Love Pot's Tale... Rachel Ann Butler

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Interesting pot of words good write

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

A romantic lovely composition, added 10 to it.

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Tia Maria 05 August 2008

hallo kind sir - thanks for your comment... got me reading yours now. This one is excellent, really takes one into the heart of the beat... or is it the beat of the heart...

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Greenwolfe 1962 25 July 2008

This is a creative approach to a writing. I am pleased with it. I found it interesting. I also liked the finish. The finish was very nice and well stated. I can recommend this. Greenwolfe 1962

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