My Love, My Creation Comments

Yes, it seems a mother's gratitude to her child...............................Nice poem.

This is a very nice tribute to a friend whom you presumably admire. The words have gently flown out from your heart, and that's why the poem is so nice. 'I came to be your friend With uncontrolled emotion.' - Why with 'uncontrolled emotion? The 2nd stanza is very nice! When your friend feels your emotions and fills up your heart, and you can feel that, that should be a heavenly feeling. 'In my mind you are an image of peace and salvation In my eyes, you my love, my creation.' - So wonderful! Simply brilliant! I have rated this poem 10/10.