Friday, February 5, 2016

My Love Melted In These Asian Pears Comments

Rating: 3.9

My love is melted in these Asian pears
Which I slice to your appropriate bite sizes.
With a sharp peeling knife, I remove their brown skins.
These pears are full and round, nicely fit in my palm.
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NHIEN NGUYEN MD
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Kimkhue Nguyen 29 July 2016

Thank you for sharing this poem. What a thoughtful poem! 10 marks.

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Dung Nguyen 09 June 2016

How beautiful your poem is!

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