Love Lost
Depression found
Happiness gone
joy bound
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i love the way you wrote this one. The incomplete sentences make it interesting! ! Another really good poem erika! WELL DONE! ! !
good job writing this poem. i like the way u wrote it. i feel ur sadness....: (
You did a very good job. It's easy to identify with and understandable despite the short lines. Very, very good.