Thursday, April 9, 2009

My Love Lost Comments

Rating: 2.3

Love Lost
Depression found
Happiness gone
joy bound
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Silent Speaker
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Autumn Jones 10 July 2009

You did a very good job. It's easy to identify with and understandable despite the short lines. Very, very good.

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Nangula Immanuel 22 April 2009

i love the way you wrote this one. The incomplete sentences make it interesting! ! Another really good poem erika! WELL DONE! ! !

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Rayjean Carter 09 April 2009

good job writing this poem. i like the way u wrote it. i feel ur sadness....: (

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