Monday, June 3, 2013

My Love Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lost my Love today,
The pain is unbearable.
I was told I was terrible,
So now she’s moving on.
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Oscar Robles
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Heather Wilkins 22 June 2013

excellent thoughts about her. well written.

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Naiad Childe Heiseiryu 07 June 2013

Why, this one is very nice Sir! Not that i can relate myself, but, i can feel the pain that you've felt. Though i don't know what is exactly.. but this one is well written. Hat's Off Sir!

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Liza Mahlubi 06 June 2013

i identify with this poem, cos that's how I felt and wished when my husband left me.

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Randy Crossette 04 June 2013

Now Oscar that is what I call poem. I read several of the new ones listed and I just didn't get them, didn't understand them...I think I'm just dumb or something but this one...this one I live very much. It's message is clear it's feeling sincere and so I just wanted you to know when I do read stuff I like I say so too. I don't read very much because I have problems with my eyes but I'm glad I read this one...I loved how it came together at the end and I think it was just great!

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