Monday, November 23, 2015

My Love Is Singing Within Comments

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Night is ready to say goodbye
My sleep is going to break day
I am just turning from left, right
Light is ready to come in window.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Valsa George 27 April 2019

A beautiful morning and you are getting ready to start your activities after a night's pleasant sleep and rest! You are in an energised mood and your mind is singing with joy as you greet the morn! I feel the presence of a man of contentment here! A refreshing piece of writing!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 December 2018

Liked the title of this write. It drew me to go through with the whole write. The rest of the work has been woven to affirm deep faith in the Almighty. Yes, this wonderful piece of art shows the Poet's love is singing. within for the Father Above. Well penned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 February 2016

We all need love! Able to settle the mind in peace. Nice piece of work.

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Anita Sharma 24 November 2015

Saying good night I usually sleep Saying good morning I shall rise I have deep faith within my mind My love is singing within for you., , , indeed love is shining within sir in fact within your words such true wisdom you are as a poet.you are wonderful writer sir

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Akhtar Jawad 24 November 2015

Nature is entirely ready to sing To welcome sun flowers are blooming Birds have started flying for food All are getting your boon oh father. A beautiful divine poem..........

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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