My Love Is Like The Proxigean Spring Tide Comments

As certain things are to be loved in secret, I love thee to the depth with wall I know nice poem 10

very meaningful write, well penned... 10

A pensive piece on subtle love! great 10

Very touchy poem like while reading we get absorbed in it 10

That is the magic of love! 10

The words are impeccable! ! ! ..........10

Too long for those who's really feel this sorrow My love is like the proxigean spring tide, But it is no hope and no desire for tomorrow And all I know is that The Lord is by my side..ya lord is always on right side and if that has to be realised only his blessings may make it readlity...beautiful poem....10 read mine.. wish i could explain...humble submission...o.lored..prayer

interesting poem 10

interesting piece. I love the way your lines flow and the images reach into my soul

interesting piece, lovely to read..............

nice poem, lovely rhymes................

nicely penned, enjoyable to reed...........

Your poem glowing dear mari! ! the binary opposition 'me' and 'thee' here encompassed that the reader touched! signifieds are successfully disclosed as words/descriptors did it with pure love! 1010101010+

very neatly done. I enjoy the emotions evoked from the poem. it relates to me so much. thanks for sharing.

A pensive piece on subtle love! great

a touching poem ended so warmly..

Hey this poem had moved me.Particularly these two lines 'And when my heart is filling with this thrill...I need lost precious moments to envy, ' ... Its really well crafted with lot of feel.

And when my heart is filling with this thrill I need lost precious moments to envy, But like a storm your angry and my shrill Embarrass little hope and I begin to cry............... heart sways by thrill, yet crunches by the blow life begins to cry by innocence as hope forsakes love of home..........excellent display of shadowed love as the array of decadence losing its strength by the desire, yet emanates joy being in unison, eloquent flw of words with ingenuity, great write,10+++, thanks for sharing