Monday, November 8, 2004

My Love, I Am Crying For Your Love...... Comments

Rating: 4.1

You said to me that you will be there on that day
but when that day came then you were not there for me
So much love showered and so many promises were made
but nothing worked on my way because you had gone
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Ravi Sathasivam
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tariq 16 August 2020

this is a good poem i try to sing it

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Abdulrahman 16 June 2020

Add a comment.I like it

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susheela Shiju 07 December 2018

loved this piece of workKeep writing

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Hira Akhtar 10 July 2018

Beautiful! I remembered my mamma while reading this.Her soul has been taken away in heavens but my love will never die for her! Everyone understands the meanings of thinga from their experiences, I took it as this.😊

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melissa 13 June 2018

Add a comment. i really ,really love your poems

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henry 13 June 2018

Add a comment. i love your poem about Sorry,I Am Sorry My Love

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memory 13 June 2018

Add a comment. nice poem

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Akhtar Jawad 07 June 2018

I will not see you again but your memories will stay for ever A touching poem.

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ihsan Aziz 06 May 2018

Lovely poetry and meaningful is my soul

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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 April 2018

Set in a stanza of three Good use of the quintet device. Sylva Onyema Uba

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Sorrowful poem, indeed. But the truth.

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Naila Rais 20 March 2018

Sad to hear.... Really heart touching poem❤️❤️.... I love your last line... Keep courage... Rate my poem too Let me rise.. Naila

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Aya Sunga Askert 29 November 2017

Now I am crying for you..so touching. Thank you for this poem

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 October 2017

The intensity of love has been brilliantly depicted through a precise few words..! A very nice creation..! I loved the piece..! ! A wonderful poem..Enjoyed reading it

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 June 2017

So much love showered and so many promises were made but nothing worked on my way because you had gone my love i am crying for you, for your presence. memories. sweet now turns into pain. i cant suffer........ love and its mysteries painted so well in your beautiful poem. love, intensity, memories, sense of loss, hope in hoplessness. thank you dear poet. tony

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Louise Mcgowan 20 October 2016

Loved reading your poem,Sad but Happy

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ginger 01 December 2017

Sad and not happy.

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Helen Cooper 13 December 2005

This brought tears to my eyes. Thankyou.

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Kaylin Klein 26 November 2005

That's sad... It reminds me of my sister. You have great talent keep on writing.

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Jessica Nothing 15 April 2005

HEY Ravi how are you>>> i just LOVE your poem so much i think your poem should get Published.. i have never read a sad poem like this you Daserve 10 out or 10 good job and keep it up alots of love your poem reader

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Jessica Nothing 15 April 2005

hey Ravi Sathasivam how are you>> i JUST LOVE

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