You said to me that you will be there on that day
but when that day came then you were not there for me
So much love showered and so many promises were made
but nothing worked on my way because you had gone
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Beautiful! I remembered my mamma while reading this.Her soul has been taken away in heavens but my love will never die for her! Everyone understands the meanings of thinga from their experiences, I took it as this.😊
I will not see you again but your memories will stay for ever A touching poem.
Set in a stanza of three Good use of the quintet device. Sylva Onyema Uba
Sad to hear.... Really heart touching poem❤️❤️.... I love your last line... Keep courage... Rate my poem too Let me rise.. Naila
Now I am crying for you..so touching. Thank you for this poem
The intensity of love has been brilliantly depicted through a precise few words..! A very nice creation..! I loved the piece..! ! A wonderful poem..Enjoyed reading it
So much love showered and so many promises were made but nothing worked on my way because you had gone my love i am crying for you, for your presence. memories. sweet now turns into pain. i cant suffer........ love and its mysteries painted so well in your beautiful poem. love, intensity, memories, sense of loss, hope in hoplessness. thank you dear poet. tony
That's sad... It reminds me of my sister. You have great talent keep on writing.
HEY Ravi how are you>>> i just LOVE your poem so much i think your poem should get Published.. i have never read a sad poem like this you Daserve 10 out or 10 good job and keep it up alots of love your poem reader
this is a good poem i try to sing it