Monday, January 13, 2014

My Love For You Comments

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My love for you is like a rose
it desires the summer rain
and petals large enough to conceal
each thorn that causes pain
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Laura Anne
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Khairul Ahsan 13 January 2014

It's a beautiful poem on love. The first stanza stands out as the best. If I may say, the poem would rhyme well if you could rearrange the last four words 'for you and me' to 'for me and you'. If you have time, please go through some of mine too and be kind to say a word or two as feedback. I'll appreciate!

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Rishabh Bidya 13 January 2014

Nice work Laura. Loved Reading it! ! ! : D

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