It's a beautiful poem on love. The first stanza stands out as the best.
If I may say, the poem would rhyme well if you could rearrange the last four words 'for you and me' to 'for me and you'.
If you have time, please go through some of mine too and be kind to say a word or two as feedback. I'll appreciate!
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It's a beautiful poem on love. The first stanza stands out as the best. If I may say, the poem would rhyme well if you could rearrange the last four words 'for you and me' to 'for me and you'. If you have time, please go through some of mine too and be kind to say a word or two as feedback. I'll appreciate!