My Love For You Comments

a few spelling mistakes spotted, pls correct it to make more sense...? ? Sorry for my bad comments but your poem is excellent if the spelling are corrected in order to make sense of it. example, then should be than and give in take should be Give and Take...sound logical..

I liked reading this one, very passionate writing Keep it up

How wonderful to have the love you have. Have you ever read Twenty Love Poems And A song of Despair by Pablo Neruda or any of his love poems? I think you would be at home with his words. Junior

You put a lot of love into this verse.