My love for you
alternates like a dark cloud
between the Sun and rain,
its fringe lightened by rays
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" my love for you…. touch(es) clouds floating over its head" beautiful ode to the Mahatma. Thank you for sharing… top
my love for you lives like a sage...I liked this but not...'my love for you sleeps like the mythical giant Kumbhakarna'
Great poem piece. Rarely I get such good poems to read here. A meaningful metaphor you employ. A great eloquent piece in dedication to Mahatma Gandhi