Sunday, November 2, 2014

My Love For You Comments

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My love for you is exotic like

The Autumn orb that lights
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Bull Hawking
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Bull Hawking 03 November 2014

Thanks Mandolyn.....glad you liked it....it always pleases me when you comment....because your insight is so keen. Kim....had to laugh....I meant to say ye gads but was afraid it would make me sound too intellectual... ;) thanks also for the kind words.

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Kim Barney 02 November 2014

Great poem, Bull. Just one thing: I would suggest changing ye to thee because ye is plural and thee is singular. (Forgive this intrusion from a former English teacher.) Also totally agree with Mandolyn's comment!

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