Friday, September 25, 2009

My Love For You Comments

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This poem is a Malayan Pantoum. The Rhyming Pattern is A1 B 1 A2 B2
B1 C1 B2 C2 C1 D1 C2 D2...........etc Ending with A2 A1. Th Rhyming Pattern will be apparent when you read the poem. It does not ciover much ground and in the end (like true love) it comes back to the beginning!

My love for you will never ever change
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John Knight
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V H Ferguson 13 October 2009

Wonderful, as ever - and i love the style and structure of it. I remain in awe of your work :)

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 27 September 2009

A P E R F E C T L O V E / an Amorous Poem/ the structure makes it more and more splendid

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Luwi Habte 26 September 2009

oh! , what a poem, romantic also so very hilarious nice piece luwi

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