My Love (An Ode) Comments

You are he wish You are the desire Everyone loves to fill with... Good use of quatrain for stanzaic and stylistic effects. SylvaOnyema Uba

short and sweeet.. its nice

Love is the key about life; and love is all that we need. Nice work.

Mmmmmmh, and I love this piece.

Got a bit repetitive here Abdul. Try not to wear your heart on your sleeve. Play it cool and they'll come swarming to your door.

very nice.............

So emotional...........i love thissSsss

thank you all very much...i appreciate whatever you all say evaluating this piece of love poem..

Helloy! like I, too, so I can Write, compose together. **************************** His a love... his a love... your name is love find love you find love you lose you

love speaking...running....walking with ease in all the hearts alike...................

heya.. Very good one.. God bless you

thank you John Kim for lovely comment..

Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

Your poem is wonderful. Endless dimensions of love with a cristal clear style of narration. I also love my love.

thank you very much for comments Maryam Siddique

But you never love as my love should love me - being a venus in cancer and mars in scorpio I always feel my love never loves me as my love should

in your poem you are saying you love more than the other person loves you. this is unfair love. I love the thought here.

Just down into the core of love just luvli! ...regards

the poem has been edited....

The last ten lines are really beautiful...