My Love Adieu Comments

Yea! I recollect these verses. Its structure's crafted with care, even in the conditions of a freestyle. The most spectacular upside of the sonnet is it-s ending line; a supposed mirthless point, a resounding question to engrave the pain from past gay lovers' summer'd days and winter'd night- squashed by death's brusqueness... Exempting such rhetorical closing; primary from me is to relish its goodness and offer a thumbs up!